story| The Sheep/Wolf Dilemma

That sheepish creature is horrible. Just look into his eyes and you’ll know why I say ‘horrible’. Look clearly, you would see a wolf in him. I swear to God I have seen one! Don’t mock me. People say that he hadn’t eaten one single sheep in his life. But how on earth! I am confused. Okay, wait, let me tell you the whole story.
A wolf has come to our village last year. He lives among us since then. Yes don’t be astonished. At the time he arrived, everybody got scared but nobody intended to shoot him. He proved to be different; he looks like a wolf, eats like a wolf, howls like wolf, but acts like a sheep! I still can’t understand this formula. Anybody can explain?
Until his arrival, I had been believeing since childhood that George, my aged wicked neighbor, is an ideot. I heard him once making noises from his mouth and wishing to have his throat cut, if he hadn’t seen a wolf mating with a sheep. ”How dare he utters such crap! I shall deal with this foolish old carcass in my own way and one day I’ll fulfill his wishes.” I responded quietly.
I could’nt bare seeing that creature roaming the houses, waiting for housewives to throw crumbs of food to him. They called him ’Sheeppy’. The old man is a fool. That afternoon when I was on my way to cut some wood from the nearby forest, it happened that I came across him. Our eyes met – my heart jumped; Oh God! That creature is nothing but a mere wolf– with white wool? and sheepish face?!
From that moment onwards, I felt something different towards that creature. He looks lovely; one of the cutest wolves indeed. ”I shall feed you and wash your fur regularly good boy” I said to him. I don’t think he heard me. In fact, why should I hate a peaceful creature? I think George is hiding something from me. Did he really see a wolf mating with a sheep one day? Anyway, I shouldn’t hate him only because he lacks that distinguished ‘wolfness’ in wolves.
Um, but something weird has always made me hesitant about that wolf (sheep). As if he knows how I feel towards him, believe me or not. He behaves differently in front of me, as last week, when I was offering him some grass –I though wolves don’t eat grass– he refused to go away after having his meal, insisting to jump on me. He showed me his teeth, I got scared, I shouted at him and ran into my house, leaving him howling from behind.

George assured me the following day that he sees ”nothing unnatural” in my description of the wolf’s behavior. I know he is lying. He wants me to be killed. ”That’s the way an eerie sheep plays with people, my dear” he said. Well, but I hate playing, I hate eerie sheep, and I hate hearing him saying “my dear”!
I’m sure this wolf will kill somebody one day. I swear. From now on I’m not going to leave my house; let me rot inside! I shall not go out, and let people continue whispering from outside “he’s insane”. I can hear George’s voice among them. No doubt he wishes me to be killed.
إحتفظ بصفحة الخلاصــات لتتابع جديد التدوينات، أو إشترك بـ القائمة البريدية لمتابعتها عبر بريدك - [؟]
[ قرأها 133 ] [ أرسلها لصديقك ] [ نسخة للطباعة ]
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you can say it’s just like masks the people put in their faces everyday
when they find someone who knows their truth they would kill him
anyway one can’t hide for ever
i would be more bold to reveal those sheepish wolfs faces out there
good luck :)
I meant if there were more clues and less riddles ….
Back to your story I want just to add a little thing … What I liked most in this story that its climax are like everyday problems we face ..
The first thing came to my mind while reading this story was Israel …
like that it began … a sheep then once a wolf … But when anyone cried with its truth … was believed to be insane … The little , lovely sheep was under estimated ….
Thanks and I’m sorry for being so silly …
I send my regards
Anyhow it is no surprise these days, with the advance in “surgery”, any “creature” may be shaped into another.. so perhaps one day it will be the trend among people as well to shape their faces into images of other creatures as wolves, sheep, dogs, or any of their favorite and popular pets and animals !
The point you’ve raised concerning Israel is worth paying attention for. A sheep? A wolf? It depends on the person who is evaluating Israel. A westerner will mostly consider Israel a sheep — even a lamb. But it’s not the case here in the Arab world.
The reader shouldn’t expect me to guide him towards the “butter”. I need him to build his own view depending on what HE sees between the lines. Thank you for sharing me your thoughts. You welcome.
Such short stories, as the one I’ve written above, are classified according to a method of narration called: Subjective Narration.
This means that the story is only narrated by one person who is one of the characters in the story. His narration is considered subjective because it’s the only one we come across & because we don’t get the viewpoint of the other characters.
In this case, notice that the reader don’t get to know how the old man (the neighbor) is really like. We got to know him only from the narrator. There is nothing which proves to us that the old man is filthy and wicked. I think you should reconsider the remark made by the villagers at the narrator: “He’s insane”.
It’s like when you meet someone on the street whom you don’t know. He tells you something and you believe him at once!
Huh? What do you think?
كالساحرة الصغيرة
فورا …… تذكرت اسرائيل
كم في حياتنا من اسرائيل !!!
الذئاب في زي صوفي كثيرة هذه الايام وتجوب الشوارع دون ان يلحضها احد !
لديك حس فني واسلوب واعد في كتابة القصة
الى الامام
تحياتي
The story’s atmosphere reminds me with my feelings I had when reading ” The hound of the Baskervilles ” … being nervous , curious and confused … It’s really confusing … I as a reader can’t choose a team to join . Shall I be with the narator and his strange feelings towards the wolf … ak\ll shall I be with the others and believe that the narator is in sane just as they believe … It’s a nice storybut only if the clues were fewer … but I have enjoyed the feelings of insane and the situations he was in ….
very nice … and good luck